For my portfolio I have chosen to revise my argument analysis essay. My main strengths from my argument analysis essay were having a clear understanding of the article and logical evidence. Throughout my essay, I knew what the authors argument was and what his intentions were. Also,I had sufficient evidence to make my point clear and understandable. My weaknesses were not having a strong thesis that connected my ideas and not having a personal response in the conclusion. In order to improve my essay, I will need to establish a strong thesis. My thesis will help connect all of my ideas. In my conclusion, I will need to write a personal response about the article. It is very important that the reader has an idea of what I believe.
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